Self Reflection - Essay 1

 I decided to use brainstorming for this essay because it gave me a clearer idea for organizing my information. As far as feedback goes, peer feedback did help me structure my paragraphs better, and helped me get a better idea of the mistakes I was making like my hook, slightly lacking the appeal, but nonetheless it helped me slightly fix it, but as for Ms. D's feedback, it really steered me in the right direction in what I was lacking as far as depth in the paragraphs. For the final copy, I made little changes in almost each of the paragraphs, just to try to get the best paper I could make, possible. There were fairly no issues in revising, just a better understanding of what I was revising and why I was doing it helped. In the next assignment, I would spend more time on being careful with the structure of my paragraphs and inn what order I input the information.